Monday, October 13, 2014

'Blackout Poetry,' Making Poetry From Newspaper Articles


My poem Monster Mash (printed below) was inspired by employing a unique technique I first heard about after viewing a video profile of Austin Kelon, a Texas-based poet, writer and illustrator.

Stumped by writer's block, Kleon created an entire book’s worth of poetry while scouring the newspaper for words he could craft into his own.

After taking a hiatus from writing following college, Kleon, then working by day as a web designer, eventually returned to composing prose and poetry and quickly discovered that writing the next Great American Novel was not going to be as easy as he had envisioned.

His words had left him, he said in a 2010 interview with the Poetry Foundation. He was stymied by writer’s block.

“I thought I just don’t have any words,” he said. “I kinda looked over at the recycle bin next to my desk and it was piled full of newspapers. I thought, I don’t have any words and right over there are millions of them.”

With black marker in hand, Kleon began “deleting words from the paper and letting some just float there.”
Austin Kleon's collection of
"blackout poetry."

The results were some stunning pieces of poetry, though Kleon didn’t recognize it as such at first.

He wasn’t trying to create poetry, rather he thought of it was a writing exercise to prime the pump of creativity that would lead to “bigger writing,” like a short story, or a novel or even a comic strip. It was his wife who convinced him that he was actually creating textual art and poetry from the newspaper articles.

Kleon began focusing his spare time on the poetry project which was later made into a book, Newspaper Blackout, a collection of his newspaper poetry. He wrote the entire book while scouring newspaper articles during daily commutes on the bus to and from work and in the basement at the office during lunch breaks.

He says he treats the newspaper like a blank canvas and scans articles like a word search puzzle, looking for words and phrases that are eventually shaped into a poem. He approaches each article/poem differently, either totally transforming the article into an unrecognizable piece of poetry or twisting the article to mean something entirely different.

The art, he says, comes from transforming news articles into pieces of poetry that resonate with personal meaning.

Says Kleon: “Transforming this non-fictional journalistic artifact, taking that and turning it into something very personal that’s mine that I feel could have come out of me … that’s the real joy.”

Making Monster Mash


The idea of testing out Kleon’s method for creating poetry has been lying dormant for several years, but on a whim one recent Sunday morning, I scooped up the freebie newspaper off the driveway and brought it inside to attempt to create poetry from a news article.

I scanned the front page of the community section and was immediately arrested by the lede: “It’s all in the accessories; tiaras, wands, wigs, witches hats, capes and pirate eye patches.”

Glancing over the article, I saw words like monster, anger, beauty queens, parade and more. I knew I had struck gold.

First, I started by simply underlying words and phrases of interest and began compiling in my head some sort of sense of the various words. They soon branched out in a multitude of directions so I began jotting them down.
My original list of words as I tried to make order of the imagery

Actually, the article was quite colorful and provided a ton of images. Almost too many; it was hard to focus on just one thread until suddenly a voice came through the clutter. The voice of an erstwhile beauty queen whose superficiality belies the hurt, anger and loneliness that resides inside. Miss Cupcake – all smiles outside but an angry monster beneath the tiara. But not really a monster – just a regular person hurt and alone and desperate for human contact.  



The result is Monster Mash.

Monster Mash
By Donald G. Redman

Tiaras, wands
And eye patches.
I am our monster.
Anger at a young age;
Hours a day,
Eating.

Please call.

Monster masks
for Beauty Queens.
A regal parade
led by
Miss Cupcake,
Riding full-face to the zoo.

Call the Monster.
Call.


Not too shabby for a first attempt. I found the exercise quite stimulating and engaging and look forward to creating more "blackout poetry." I strongly encourage you to give it a try, too.

Austin Kleon is the New York Times bestselling author of three illustrated books: Steal Like An Artist, a manifesto for creativity in the digital age; Show Your Work! a guide to sharing creativity and getting discovered; and Newspaper Blackout,  a collection of poetry made by redacting words from newspaper articles with a permanent marker.

In previous lives, he worked as a librarian, a web designer, and an advertising copywriter.

Learn more about Kleon on his website.

View the 2010 Poetry Foundation video interview here.


Monster Mash, copyright 2014 Donald G. Redman. All rights reserved.

Thursday, October 9, 2014

Looking For Dad, Finding A Killer


A Review of The Most Dangerous Animal of All
by Don Redman
Susan Mustafa’s The Most Dangerous Animal of All, a collaborative effort with Gary L. Stewart, defies all labels – part true crime, part memoir, part mystery, part inspirational – but in toto, it’s a very compelling book.
The subtitle gives a clue to the book’s central premise: “Searching for My Father and Finding the Zodiac Killer,” and the person searching for his father is Gary Stewart, Mustafa’s collaborator. Stewart was adopted into a loving family when he was only three months old, but his world was turned upside down when, at the age of 39, he received a phone call from a woman claiming to be his biological mother.

And so Stewart’s journey begins as he sets out from south Louisiana to San Francisco to reconnect with his biological mother, hoping to learn about the circumstances that led to her decision to offer him up for adoption, and to hopefully acquire details about his biological father.
As American novelist James Baldwin once said, “Be careful what you set your heart upon – for surely it will be yours.”

What begins as a feel-good reunion between son and mother, soon devolves into an obsessive pursuit for the truth and a descent into near despair. 

It’s a tough balancing act for Mustafa, who must make sense of bundles of seemingly unrelated threads: underage marriage; an abandoned baby; a ruthless biological father; a happy reunion with biological mother; police cover-up; family secrets; a loving adoptive family; and cold-blooded murder. To say the least, this is not your typical true crime book.

But it wasn’t supposed to be a true crime book. Not in the beginning.
Mustafa’s masterful retelling of the events, based in part on Stewart’s journals and records and on her own meticulous research, weaves for us a full, rich and detailed kesi upon which every aspect of Stewart’s life is on full display: the good, the bad and the ugly.

Stewart is to be commended for opening his life up so completely, and it is not easy not to wince as he speaks frankly about his biological parent’s dubious past, nor is it easy to witness the unfolding of his suppressed but lingering pain of abandonment and rejection. But his dogged determination to expose the truth may have uncovered the real identity of the serial killer known as the Zodiac, Earl Van Best, Jr. – his father.
Earl Van Best Jr. next to police sktch of the Zodiac killer
The Zodiac serial killer is believed to have killed five people in northern California between December 1968 and October 1969 and gained notoriety by mocking the police by writing several letters to San Francisco Bay Area newspapers boasting of the slayings. These letters included four codes or ciphers in which the killer claimed also contained his identity. Of the four cryptograms sent, only one has been definitively solved, but not his identity.

 The Zodiac claimed to have killed as many as 37 people, but police have been able to positively pin only five murders on him. While the case remains open in various jurisdictions, the case is cold and remains a low priority.
Gary Stewart appeared at one point to have been very close to convincing the San Francisco Police Department to actively pursue his father as a plausible candidate as the Zodiac, but for mysterious reasons, the investigation into Earl Van Best, Jr. was shut down without explanation or fanfare. Potentially at the heart of the sudden dismissal may be an attempt by unseen hands to stifle the investigation to prevent possible embarrassment to one of SFPD’s favorite sons, the late Rotea Gilford, who had married Van Best’s ex-wife (and Stewart's mother). Stewart and Mustafa muse that it is possible that Gilford’s friends on the police force wanted to protect Gilford’s legacy; to protect him from forever being tied to the Zodiac killer.

Employing Mustafa’s contacts in the world of forensic science, Stewart has compiled very credible evidence and makes an impressive argument that his biological father was indeed the Zodiac killer. He even finds what past decoders never could uncover: the hidden name of the killer within the cipher – Earl Van Best Jr.
The research and documentation aside, what gives the book a real heart and soul is Stewart’s personal story: his relationship with his own son and his adoptive parents; his topsy-turvy relationship with his biological mother; his disastrous search for his half-brother and half-sister; his spiritual journey; and the emotionally draining but dogged chase after a ghost … a ghost that was alternately a father and a drunk and a monster. And finally, it’s about making peace with the past, whatever that may have been.

Regardless how the facts may play in the future, whether Stewart’s research was correct or not, the book is a very compelling read and a deep and personal examination of one man’s soul.
Susan Mustafa talks about her book, “The Most Dangerous Animal of All.”

Read our interview with Susan here.

Sunday, March 9, 2014

An Interview with ‘Radium Girls’ Playwright, D.W. Gregory

By Don Redman

D.W. Gregory grew up in Pennsylvania in a family of Irish Catholics and German Lutherans _- “the Irish won out in the religion department, and the Germans in the culinary department,” she says.

D.W. Gregory

Photo by:

Claire Newman-Williams
During her formative years she became fascinated with the Algonquin Roundtable – a renowned group of writers, critics, actors and wags in the 1920s who met for lunch each day at the Algonquin Hotel in New York to trade lively banter. She was particularly drawn to writer and drama critic George S. Kaufman, whose notable works include Of Thee I Sing – earning the first Pulitzer Prize awarded to a musical – and the Pulitzer Prize-winning drama, You Can’t Take It With You.

“I thought it would be really cool to be a theatre critic in the 20s,” says Gregory. “Since I couldn't engineer that career choice I went into journalism as a business reporter and worked in daily newspapers for a number of years.”

She says she drifted into playwriting because she “didn't have enough nerve to be an actress. So I get to play all the parts at the keyboard.”

Gregory began her career path as a playwright first by attending workshops and “writing terrible one-acts with no real point.”

“That went on for a few years,” she said, “and then one day something clicked and I wrote a children's play that won a contest and a 10-minute play that eventually was a finalist for the Heideman Award at Actors Theatre of Louisville.  This proved encouraging and I kept on writing plays.”

Drawing on her working-class roots, Gregory’s plays, whether comedies or dramas, often explore the disconnect between the dream and reality of American blue-collar experience. That’s what attracted her to the Radium Girls when she read about the real-life events in a newspaper article.

“What interested me about the story,” she says, “was the idea that you could be on the job, at work, just doing the job you were instructed to do and end up with a horrible disease -- I found it morbidly fascinating and as I dug into the story it became apparent that there were incredible parallels between that story and the story of big tobacco, big Pharma, and myriad other cases of product liability.”

Working from a grant from the National Endowment of the Arts, Gregory developed the play at Playwrights Theatre of New Jersey.

“The original production involved the associate artistic director of the theatre,” she recalls. “I did not choose him, he just stepped into the job, but we worked together in casting -- which is really fun. Lots of actors coming in and reading the parts. I was amazed at how hard they worked to prepare. Before we got to that point, though, the play went through a series of readings and a workshop.”

The play premiered at Playwrights Theatre in 2000 and was named the Best New Play of the 1999-2000 season by the Newark Star-Ledger.

 Nearly 15 years later since writing Radium Girls, what still stays with her?

“How young they were,” she says, “how trusting, and what a horrible betrayal it was, that they were poisoned and then the company dragged its feet in taking its responsibility.”

Gregory’s approach to writing a play varies, depending on the subject: “Each play is different. Radium Girls took a lot of research, and I didn't start out with an outline so much as a list of events I knew had to be in the play. I'm writing one now that I outlined in detail. Some I start just by writing scenes and letting the characters talk.”

She says because of her regular job, she usually has to write in bunches.

“I'm a binge writer,” Gregory says. “Since I have a day job I can't put in more than an hour or two during the weekdays. When I'm working on a play I like to hole up in my office on a long weekend and crank out about 50 pages in three days.”

 Juggling multiple writing projects, Gregory’s weekends are undoubtedly busy.

“I have a couple things in development,” she says. “One is a black comedy about a young couple who move into their dream house, only to discover the new neighborhood is being stalked by a serial sniper.”

D.W. Gregory writes in a variety of styles and genres, from historical drama to screwball comedy, but a recurring theme is the exploration of political issues through a personal lens. The New York Times called her “a playwright with a talent to enlighten and provoke” for her most produced play, Radium Girls, about dialpainters poisoned on the job in the 1920s. A resident playwright at New Jersey Rep, she received a Pulitzer nomination in 2003 for the Rep’s production of The Good Daughter, the story of a Missouri farm family struggling to adapt to rapid social change. Other plays include The Good Girl Is Gone, a black comedy about maternal indifference; October 1962, a Cold War era psychological thriller; and Molumby’s Million, a comedy about the boxer Jack Dempsey, which was nominated for the 2011 Barrymore Award for Outstanding New Play by the Theatre Alliance of Philadelphia.

Gregory also writes frequently for youth theatre. Her play Salvation Road, about a boy whose sister disappears into a fundamentalist church, was developed through New York University's Steinhardt New Plays for Young Audiences program. A member of the Dramatists Guild, a former national core member of The Playwrights' Center in Minneapolis, and a recent inductee into the League of Professional Theatre Women, Gregory is also founding member of the Playwrights Gymnasium, a process oriented workshop based in metro Washington, D.C.

Thursday, May 9, 2013

'First Ladies,' A Poem By Eve Brouwer

First Ladies,   m. 1963—d. 1976

 By Eve Brouwer
(reprinted with permission)


We were the first ladies . . .
Kay, Diana, Sharon and I.
Ladies first—through doors, to be seated,
into aisles of theater seats. 
We were always ladies,
first, and foremost, and above all else.
We’d been dutiful daughters, and virgin brides,
and became good wives, and loving mothers. 
Yes, we were ladies first, and foremost, and above all else.

We were the first ladies
upon whom our husbands
bestowed their names,
the first ladies to whom they
plighted their troths.
A place of honor was given us.
We knew our place and kept to it.

We supported husbands
earning degrees
and, by degrees,
their masculinity,
husbands who came
—and went—
with impunity.
We stayed still, in ladylike passivity.
In still nights we stayed
—and waited—
loosed our chignons, our French twists
—and stopped. 
Frozen in an earlier time.

The world turned and skewed, and,
through curious eyes,
we viewed askance
political revolutions.
Through amazed eyes,
we read, titillated
by a sexual revolution.
With guilty consciences, we stood in line,
signed the children into pre-school.

Minute cracks in our polished veneer
let longings in,
let the Ms.’s hook their fingers toward us,
let the Ms.’s beguile us thus.
They kept their own names,
Wrote their own vows,
Took their own bows.

Looking back, are those our new “sisters”
marching on DC?
Is that us, sitting still, still sitting,
watching on TV?

Yes, and then . . . the husbands left.
Yes, and then . . . we fell
into the abyss.
Some to sink, some to swim,
most to flounder, betrayed
by our mothers’ voices,
our husbands’ vows,
our sisters’ visions,
our own ambitions.

Swept away, footloose, we lost our bearings,
doubted our instincts.
A toe
touched a rock here
A hand
reached for a branch there.
We loosened the weights dragging us down.
Then grabbed them back to our maternal breasts.

We emerged alive, to find
that women had put away
their feminine touches
—their pill-box hats, their white gloves, their recipe collections—
had relegated their children to others’ care,
were pursuing degrees, careers, orgasms galore.

Through it all, even as we
threw off the fancy hats,
drew on more appropriate gloves,
entered the no-holds-barred fray,
it never felt right.

Behind it all, under it all,
we were still
ladies who waited
for their men to return.
And waited, for a long time
after they'd finally gone for good. 

Yes, the first ladies in those husbands' lives
were merely the first in their series of wives.



Eve Brouwer
Photo by Donald G. Redman
Eve Brouwer lives and writes in Covington, Louisiana. An author and poet, her published works have been recognized by the New Orleans Pirate’s Alley Faulkner Society and by Louisiana Inklings. She is the 2012 St. Tammany Parish Literary Artist of the Year and she serves on the board of the Northshore Literary Society.











Copyright Eve Brouwer. All rights reserved.
Illustration by Donald G. Redman

Finding Art In The Ordinary


 An Interview with Author/Poet Eve Brouwer

by: Donald G. Redman

Eve Brouwer
Photo by Donald G. Redman
Eve Brouwer’s thousand-watt smile and effervescent personality lights up any room she enters. The former manager of the national Chia Pet television campaign – yes, that Cha-Cha-Cha Chia Pet – Eve has been a professional writer since 1980, first as a newspaper reporter then later as a writer for public relations and advertising firms. Today, she resides in Covington, Louisiana, where she continues to write, this time for art.

Her published works include short stories and poetry which have been recognized by the New Orleans Pirate’s Alley Faulkner Society, and by Louisiana Inklings. Eve was recently named as the 2012 St. Tammany Parish Literary Artist of the Year and she serves on the board of the Northshore Literary Society and helped organize Poets Alive!. She earned her B.A. at Loyola University in Chicago and her Master of Liberal Arts at the University of Chicago.

The Redman Writing Project recently caught up with Eve for an interview...

RWP: What were your earliest writing experiences? Did you write for the high school newspaper and did you keep a journal? Did you enter any writing or poetry contests in school? What did you do to foster the writing bug?

Eve Brouwer:  I think I’ve always had a strong creative instinct.  I don’t know if that’s something that’s inherited or acquired.  My father was an artist:  he played acoustical guitar, painted, and wrote.   My mother is a voracious reader.  My sister and I could not help but love art, music and literature, especially literature, anything to do with words—talking, reading, writing, acting. Anything I did to “foster the writing bug” was inadvertent, merely a natural, everyday activity.  

RWP: At what point did you decide you wanted to be a writer? Was there one teacher, one influence or was it just an accumulation of events?

Eve Brouwer:  It was an uncomfortable event that put me on the path to writing.  In seventh grade, in the Chicago Public School system, I had a wonderful teacher who was enthusiastic and kind and sincere.  When our standardized test scores came in, she was thrilled to see that two of her students had scored literally off the chart in the verbal section of the standardized test the CPS system was using at that time.  She singled us out, Loretta and me, and, in front of the whole class, asked us what we wanted to do when we grew up.  The question had never before occurred to me.  Loretta said she wanted to be a lawyer.   All I liked to do at that time was read, so, thinking of the great literature I was just beginning to discover, I said I’d like to be a writer.   Later in life, when I found myself wishing I had pursued less nebulous and more lucrative goals, I thought it would have been wise if I’d just copied Loretta’s answer and followed her into law!

RWP: How did you get your first start? What was your first published piece?

Eve Brouwer: I submitted a piece, “No, I’m Not Dutch,” to a national, religious magazine, The Banner.  The article was about the experience I’d had as a student, in the 1960’s, at a private, suburban, faith-based high school that had been founded by immigrants from the Netherlands.  Chicago at that time was—and perhaps it continues to be—comprised of ethnic groups who insulated themselves, were definitely not part of America’s “melting pot” mystic:  my parents—he of German descent, she of Italian—had in large part broken free of their ethnic bonds and expanded our family’s horizons; but my sister and I were being raised in a small Italian enclave on the city’s west side and she and I towered, although we were each only about 5’4” tall, over most of the neighborhood’s Neopolitans; it was a shock, then, on the first day of high school, to find myself suddenly short . . . and dark!  But I was, in fact, a shrimp in a sea of tall, fair, blue-eyed, very curious students who, it appeared from their questions, could not believe a non-Dutchman had entered their midst. As you would expect, the point of the article addressed the meatier differences underlying these superficial ones.   

RWP: Tell us about your poetry:

Eve Brouwer:  My sixth-grade teacher accused me of plagiarism when I wrote this poem about autumn:
The falling leaves, colored leaves,
Floating to the ground in a frolicking breeze,
Covered with brown, red and gold,
Making way for the winter cold.

Of course I had not copied it.  But I felt bad that I was accused.  So now, as I’m answering your questions, I’m thinking maybe that experience soured me on writing about nature.  But perhaps I’m being melodramatic here.  Still, in any case, I don’t write about nature.

I write about the metaphors in the objects and in the activities of our ordinary, day-to-day lives.   Although I attempt to create layers of meanings, my goal is for the pieces to be understood and enjoyed at any level, perhaps merely as stories, perhaps as stories with meaning.

 “The Tarantella,” for instance, while ostensibly recounting a day in the lives of a multi-generational family, is actually speaking of the challenges we all face in trying to balance and blend traditional values and customs with the relatively-new freedoms and opportunities to be found in contemporary society: 

As the hours passed,as we workedthat March dayin that hot kitchen,the matriarch told stories,told tales,of a long ago sister-in-law who . . .did not like to cook!Who would rather work in her garden!!Or write poems!!!Or paint pottery!!!!Or go to parties!!!!!Than prepare meals for her family.“Hmmmm,” we three murmured,eyes assiduously averted,hands occupied,mincing garlic into submission,focusing energies,funneling talents.Hot tomatoes concentratingin and onthe contents of the pots.

Another poem of mine, “First Ladies,” a narrative piece, tells the tale of four friends, each of whom was married in 1963 and divorced in 1976.  But it places their personal events in the larger context of the upheavals of those tumultuous years:

The world turned and skewed, and,
through curious eyes,
we viewed askance
political revolutions.
Through amazed eyes,
we read, titillated,
by a sexual revolution.
With guilty consciences, we stood in line,
signed the children into pre-school.

Minute cracks in our solid veneer
let longings in,
let the Ms.’s hook their fingers toward us,
let the Ms,’s beguile us thus.
They kept their own names,
Wrote their own vows,
Took their own bows.


RWP: Most writers will tell you that there is a particular time of the day they feel they are most creative and do most of their writing. When do you do the bulk of your writing?

Eve Brouwer: I write in the morning, when I’m the most alert and fresh.  I keep paper and pen on my nightstand and write my first drafts in longhand.   Sometimes I rewrite and rewrite and rewrite in longhand but usually I’ll key an early draft into the computer and continue on from there.

RWP: What is the most difficult aspect of writing for you?

Eve Brouwer: Wondering if my work is effective, if it has a style of its own, if it’s too naïve or too obscure, if I should be doing it at all.

RWP: Is there a person you turn to for support or to critique your writing before publication?

Eve Brouwer: I have to mention what a great support my husband, Randy Cronk, is.  What I especially value is that he reads everything I write and makes comments and even re-reads subsequent drafts.  
As you can imagine, this hands-on type of encouragement is invaluable.  Having someone believe in you and in your talent is good.  Then when they actually put in this kind of time and effort, it's fantastic! 

RWP: What are your interests?

Eve Brouwer:  Conversation and culture. I like sitting around in restaurants, drinking wine, talking interminably, growing wittier by the glass. I also love movies, especially foreign and independent films.  St. Tammany Parish Library is a wonderful resource.  And I like opera.  I appreciate the simulcast productions that the NY Met makes available to us at the Stadium 14 movie theater in Covington.  

RWP: What are you writing today?

Eve Brouwer:  Aside from a number of individual poems and a few short stories, I’m working on two projects:  selling my novella, My Grandmother Danced, and co-writing a nonfiction book, with my sister, based on correspondence between our parents during World War II. 
o       My Grandmother Danced is about how we reach out to the world, how we celebrate or shape or bury significant events, perhaps as wonderful memories, perhaps as deeply-held secrets that we will forever keep hidden, even from ourselves. More specifically, it’s the story of the repercussions that follow when a naïve, exuberant bride happily accepts her father-in-law’s invitation to dance with him at her wedding reception.   However, the structure of My Grandmother Danced is rather unusual, perhaps, I worry, too unusual:  each chapter is a poem, which, for marketing purposes, I’m no longer identifying as poems but am now describing as “brief, lyrical chapters.”  This terminology change is primarily due to responses similar to that of an agent who, upon hearing the word poem, refused to look at even the first page and said something like, “I never read poetry.  I didn’t study it in college.  I don’t understand it.”  I was shocked.  Aren’t nursery rhymes our very first literary love! 
o       The second project is the book I’m co-authoring with my sister, Phyllis Pals, who is also a writer:  our father was second-generation American, but he’d learned German from his grandparents and so found himself assigned to the POW camps in Fort Collins, Colorado.  His letters are fascinating as a unique window into the psyche of the Nazi prisoners and also as an incisive commentary on the cultural and societal norms of the 1940’s.  We’d like to include photos of paintings done by one of the prisoners and given to my father.  A particular favorite is of me, copied from a photo my father carried with him.  My understanding is that the prisoners made their own paints using vegetable oil that they colored with substances found in nature.   As is obvious, we are still researching our facts.

RWP: What advice would you give to novice writers or even those unpublished writers still slugging it out?

Eve Brouwer:  Interact with writers as much as possible.  Listen to others and also tell others about your craft.  Whether you’re published or not, identify yourself as a writer.  Join literary groups and attend conferences:  in the St. Tammany Parish, Louisiana, area, I especially recommend the Northshore Literary Society and the local chapter of the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators and Covington’s Poets Alive!

List five of your favorite poets and or authors:
o       James Thurber
o       Thomas Hardy
o       Marcel Proust
o       Ha Jin
o       Emily Dickinson
o       Jon Krakauer

List ten books you’ve read that you’ll never forget:
o       Little Women, Louisa May Alcott
o       The Ox Bow Incident, Walter Van Tilburg Clark
o       Ethan Frome, Edith Wharton
o       When the Crocodile Eats the Sun, Peter Godwin
o       Berlin Diaries 1940-1945, Marie Vassiltchikov
o       Edie: American Girl, Jean Stein
o       Blooming, Susan Allen Toth
o       As Always, Julia, ed. Joan Reardon
o       War and Peace, Leo Tolstoy
o       One Writer’s Beginnings, Eudora Welty
o       The Little Red Guard, Wenguang Huang
o       Herself Defined:  H. D. and Her World, Barbara Guest

Oh oh, maybe that’s more than ten!

RWP: What are you reading right now?

Eve Brouwer:  Well, I have followed my own advice and have joined the type of social and study groups where I meet a good number of writers.  That said, I also am a person who wants everyone to like me and wants to please everyone . . . so, I’m currently very busy trying to catch up and read books of authors I know.  I want to be able to say, when I run into these authors, “I read and enjoyed your book!”  These are some of them (and I really did like them!):  Cuba onMy Mind by Katie Wainwright; Davenport’sVersion by John Gery; Unless a LoveBe Free by Jerilyn Willin; Dancing onGlass by Pamela Ewen Lott; The Beachat Herculaneum by Susan G. Muth; AmySigns by Rebecca Willman Gernon; Mattersof the Heart by Mary Culver.  And I’m just now starting two more: Mercury Falls by Robert Kroese and Finding Faith in theCity Care Forgot by Teena Myers.  

RWP: Where can people find your work and where can they follow you?

Eve Brouwer:  Two of my pieces—a poem, “The Tarantella,” and a short story, “Gloria,” are included in Louisiana Inklings: A Literary Sampler, an anthology that is available electronically through Amazon and Barnes and Noble.
A non-fiction book I especially liked contributing to is The Mad Cow Crisis: Health and the Public Good, edited by Scott Ratzan.

RWP: Thank you.


Copyright 2013 Donald G. Redman. All rights reserved.

Tuesday, August 21, 2012

10 Haiku


I recently rediscovered haiku – a form of poetry I never totally got before. I think today’s looser interpretations of haiku have broaden the boundaries, making it more appealing to me. I am, however, more willing today to explore the works of the Old Masters with a greater appreciation than I had in my youth.

Today I offer my first attempts...

10 Haiku

by Donald G. Redman

I.
Pan’s flute clogged with slime.
Algae blooms in the fountain.
Dog days of summer.

II.
A scoop of ice cream
melting on the hot sidewalk.
Tears like summer’s rain.

III.
Droplets of red light
like rubies on the windshield.
A wet commute home.

IV.
Birds yell from treetops
over the drone of lawnmowers.
Spring in the suburbs.

V.
A dewdrop dangles.
A dragonfly lands lightly.
A drip. A ripple.

VI.
Lucky is the child
Who can close her eyes and let
The world disappear.

VII.
Night comes without you.
An eternity passes.
I lie awake, still.

VIII.
Leaves stirred by a sigh.
I spy you among the trees,
But I look away.

IX.
A loon’s wail echoes
Across the blackened waters.
Heartache spreads like fog.

X.
Fallen rose petals
Litter the broken pathway.
Torn flesh bleeds anew.


Copyright 2012 Donald G. Redman All rights reserved.

Wednesday, August 15, 2012

"The Llama Song"


The Llama Song

by Donald G. Redman


I was up late Saturday night. I couldn’t sleep for thoughts of you were invading my dreams like a horde of Tatars.

Easing from the bedside so as not to arouse the woman lying next to me buried beneath layers of blankets, I gathered my robe and tiptoed out into the darkness of my house.

Safe in the kitchen, I grabbed a small snifter and a bottle of cognac and went into the den to seek you out. And there I found you, tucked inside my favorite poetry book – the same tattered book I brought with me when we stole that weekend to your family’s beach house.

I tried recalling some of the poems we liked, but they all seemed to blend together. I do remember you were fond of Walt Whitman.

It was getting really late and I thought of returning to the woman beneath the blankets. Her slumber was intense; sounds of her snoring echoed down the dark hallway and reverberated off my blackened heart.

The cognac cried out for one more sip and so I obliged.

I scanned past a few more odes, telling myself each would be the last, and then I came across “The Llama Song.” Suddenly, you were stretched out across the couch next to me, your head resting on my lap. I saw your eyebrows, how they arch in such a taunting fashion. I saw your slightly crooked smile and I felt a warmth no cognac could ever provide.

You remember “The Llama Song” don’t you? It wasn’t really called that, but we gave it that name. It was a poem about a couple who realized they were falling in love with each other while still in other relationships. There was a verse something like, “I will not let you love me, but my love for you is so intense.”

They tried valiantly to fight their feelings and you told me you could relate; that you were being torn between two emotions, one to start life anew with me and the other to stay put. I agreed, saying I felt like Dr. Doolittle’s two headed llama and you laughed. “Pushmi-pullyu! This will be our Llama Song.”

The poem ended with the couple caving to love and running off together to spend eternity sipping nectar at the feet of the gods. Or something like that.

But you aren’t one to completely cave are you? You said “The Llama Song” was ultimately a fairytale; there are no happy endings in the affairs of the heart. People are tempted by affairs to feel alive again, but eventually you fall from heaven and are no longer sipping nectar at the feet of the gods, but mopping the kitchen and mowing the grass.

You said I’d get bored and eventually find someone new to sing “The Llama Song.”  No, you wouldn’t be running away with me, you said.

I was as crushed as any mortal could ever be. “Look at me!” I pleaded. “My head is bursting through the sky of love. My hair is dripping with nectar. Love me!”

“But how can I tell if you will ever love me again as you do now?”

Of course I said I would love you forever and again, but that question still haunts me to this day. It’s the question I was mulling when I arose from bed to seek you out.

I corked the cognac and returned it to the shelf. Through the bay window I could see that a new day was wrestling for the reigns from the night, but the fix was in and it was just a matter of time before the nighttime surrendered.

The corner streetlight cast a grey umbrella of light over my lawn. I could see the grass was high and weeds had sprung up as if in a race to tower the trees. For a brief moment thoughts of you vanished, only to be replaced with those of lawnmowers.

Suddenly, the snoring of the woman buried beneath layers of blankets stopped. I cursed the silence.

And then it started back up like a trusty lawnmower cranks up after having choked momentarily on a clump of grass.

It was in that blissful moment between night and day that I understood “The Llama Song.” Just as am asking you, I had once asked the woman buried beneath the blankets to love me. My head had burst through the sky of love. My hair had dripped with nectar. But how could I tell if I would ever love her again as I did then?

I wanted to cry. I was weak with sadness and it felt as if my legs would surrender, but I was braced by the snores coming from the woman buried beneath the blankets.

I stumbled back to bed. I needed the rest for soon I’d be mowing the lawn.


Copyright 2012 Donald G. Redman All Rights Reserved Illustration by Donald G. Redman.